Cataracts Treatment

Question by Angela W: How to write an Introduction for a research paper on Cataract Sergery?
I am taking a class on Medical Terminology class & need to write a research paper the topic being Cataract surgery. Not sure how to go about doing a Introduction on the research paper.

Thank you all…….:)
Angela

Best answer:

Answer by Mags
I’m not going to write this for you because I don’t know the extent, direction or depth of your paper. But I would suggest that you do remember to proofread everything because to begin with a misspelling minimizes your position.

I am going to provide several links. My criteria for selecting them was that they discuss the numbers and significance of cataracts and hence the need for the surgery in the opening paragraphs. OR that they discuss the surgery and the reasons for it immediately.
http://www.cataractsurgery.com/

The next is specific to cataract surgery as the leading surgery in the world and its success rate:
http://www.cataractsurgery.com/docs/CSLife-PDF_RecoveryBasics.pdf

This one goes directly to the surgical procedure:
http://www.allaboutvision.com/conditions/cataract-surgery.htm

There are opening statements within each topic here:
http://www.nei.nih.gov/health/cataract/cataract_facts.asp

This one uses an economy of words:
http://www.lasiksurgerynews.com/news/cataract-surgery.shtml

The examples above are well written, concise, to the point. You can do this same kind of search because this is your research paper and you need to think about it. The links (and there are many more out there) are to help you focus on a direction and therefore an introduction.

You can go from the general to the specific. Your summary will explain how the examples in your opening and the body relate.

What do you think? Answer below!

Question by Tabby Reece: I need to write a thank you letter to our cataract surgery patients!! a paragraph or two.?
My doctor would like to some how say thank you and we hope the patient would send us more referrals for our practice. How would you suggest I do this!! In a manner that comes from him and his entire team

Best answer:

Answer by aneurodoc125
On behalf of my team and myself, I would like to express my thanks for your confidence in allowing me to operate your cataract. We truly hope you were happy with your results. If not, tell me. If you were, please tell your friends.

Best wishes,

______________________MD
______________________RN
______________________RN
______________________Technician
etc.

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I have a 7th grader who is doing a science project on cataracts and doesn’t know how to start.